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SKY Posted - 23 Mar 2004 : 23:16:27
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KamChor Posted - 27 Apr 2004 : 21:51:08
Fat people are greedy
Fat people are slobs
They’re unfit and lazy
And love stuffing their gobs
They know its unhealthy
Eating doughnuts and chips
Their fat guts get bigger
Along with their hips
Their arms are all flabby
Their faces are bloated
With fatty deposits
Their stomachs are coated
They’re useless and wheezy
They sweat and they stink
And only feel good taking
More food and drink
They make you feel sick
Some have trouble just walking
And some are so fat
They get breathless when talking
It should be a crime
To exist in this way
But apart from these reasons
I think they’re ok.
SKY Posted - 30 Mar 2004 : 01:59:44
Thank you, finest =) That's nice, hearing that. I read your poems, you're really great too =)

d p

london-finest Posted - 30 Mar 2004 : 00:20:47
hey loos like we have kobi s in here i dnt mean rude i mean kobis as in poets
SKY Posted - 25 Mar 2004 : 17:49:42
Yeah

dp
asaduddin Posted - 24 Mar 2004 : 16:22:02
who wrote it really

Asad Uddin
Rani Posted - 24 Mar 2004 : 12:50:41
nice poem sky , did u make the valentines day poem urself? written by u?

ThE BeAuTy Of LiFe DoEs NoT DePeNd On HoW hApPy U r, BuT oN hOw HaPpY OtHeRs CaN b BeCaUsE oF YoU
SKY Posted - 24 Mar 2004 : 02:52:44
Thats what I though too, but he's never going to grow back any hair, so lets leave it at that.

dp
Shea Posted - 24 Mar 2004 : 02:38:20
hmm, i thought he looked the best when he had short hair during the Siamese Dream period, he was good looking then, the whole bald thing makes him look chubby, even though he is really thin.

I'm in love with you (so in love)
I'm in love with you (I'm so in love)
I'm in love with you... with you
SKY Posted - 24 Mar 2004 : 02:09:41
yeah, hes a nice bald guy. hes cool.

dp
Shea Posted - 24 Mar 2004 : 02:01:46
Cause it IS a poetry! hehe, Billy Corgan is the man!

I'm in love with you (so in love)
I'm in love with you (I'm so in love)
I'm in love with you... with you
SKY Posted - 24 Mar 2004 : 02:00:15
I totally love that song.

cupid hath pulled back his sweetheart’s bow
to cast divine arrows into her soul
to grab her attention swift and quick
or morrow the marrow of her bones be thick
with turpentine kisses and mistaken blows

see the devil may do as the devil may care
he loves none sweeter as sweeter the dare
her mouth the mischief he doth seek
her heart the captive of which he speaks
so note all ye lovers in love with the sound
your world be shattered with nary a note
of one cupids arrow under your coat

and in the land of star crossed lovers
and barren hearted wanderers
forever lost in forsaken missives and satan’s pull
we seek the unseekable and we speak the unspeakable
our hopes dead gathering dust to dust
in faith’ in compassion’ and in love



I like how the last stanza is recited as a poem.

dp
Shea Posted - 23 Mar 2004 : 23:49:02
cupid de locke is a great poem, cause thats what it started out as in the beginning. check out some of billy's poems, theyre good.

I'm in love with you (so in love)
I'm in love with you (I'm so in love)
I'm in love with you... with you
SKY Posted - 23 Mar 2004 : 23:43:48
Yeah well, theres nothing that says I cant recycle. Well, if there is, I'll just write another 50.

dp
Shea Posted - 23 Mar 2004 : 23:42:15
i remember it well dude, too bad u wasted it on some dumb girl... u should have saved it for a nice girl.

heres mine

im so fine
im so fine
im so fine, i blow my mind

I'm in love with you (so in love)
I'm in love with you (I'm so in love)
I'm in love with you... with you

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